tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5071945042963593149.post3745183954822010973..comments2023-09-06T03:14:36.550+12:00Comments on Helen King: Goldilocks and the Three Bears - The EndingPES Blogs 2013 Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043164228733682681noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5071945042963593149.post-71604525879707786402009-09-03T09:23:40.822+12:002009-09-03T09:23:40.822+12:00Hey Shawn
Nice writing about the three little bea...Hey Shawn<br /><br />Nice writing about the three little bears. I like the way you have described the three little bears. There are heaps of ways to telling it.<br /><br />Anyway keep up the good work<br />Matthew and CruzMatthew and Cruzhttp://pesmatthewt.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5071945042963593149.post-7429198680315495992009-09-03T08:43:04.274+12:002009-09-03T08:43:04.274+12:00Hi Room14
What fanstatic paragraphs you have writ...Hi Room14<br /><br />What fanstatic paragraphs you have writen. What great work.Keep it up for the rest of the term.<br /><br />From Te RoimataRoom14https://www.blogger.com/profile/07060137375912279588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5071945042963593149.post-65135077945349526652009-08-31T14:36:36.031+12:002009-08-31T14:36:36.031+12:00Hi Room 14!
Those were some pretty cool paragraphs...Hi Room 14!<br />Those were some pretty cool paragraphs. I like it how you have been using new vocabulary. I liked it how Sifa included '..hair like Rapunzel's..' in one of his sentences. I also liked Chanel's paragraph. Those were all fantastic pieces of writing. I really enjoyed reading your paragraphs.<br /><br />TorekaTorekahttp://pestorekat.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5071945042963593149.post-66776495035787157932009-08-31T13:26:39.096+12:002009-08-31T13:26:39.096+12:00I agree with what Kade says about your writing Roo...I agree with what Kade says about your writing Room 14. You have writen some wonderful endings to the story. I love the way Sifa's bears give Goldilocks a good telling off for damaging their property! And Miracle, you have made Goldilocks into a sports woman, seeing the gap and running through it! I also like the endiing there that reminds me a bit of rapunzel with the long hair dangling out the window.<br />Well done all of you.Mrs Burthttp://kpetv.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5071945042963593149.post-31327505010011442732009-08-24T12:17:09.100+12:002009-08-24T12:17:09.100+12:00Hi fantastic writers,
I really like it how you use...Hi fantastic writers,<br />I really like it how you used great words and wonderful sentences.It really shows what you guys learn while you are in class.I can't wait for more good sentences.<br /> <br /> From KaydeRoom14https://www.blogger.com/profile/07060137375912279588noreply@blogger.com