Tuesday, August 4, 2009

The Pied Piper


The Pied Piper played a beautiful and mystical tune. (Toko)

Scuttling and scampering were a sea of rats. (Tina)

All the rats were attracted to the mystical tune. (Tui)

As a piper played his flute the sea of rats were lured by the mystical tune. (Hossanah)

Underneath the towering turrets a piper played a mystical tune. (Hossanah)

Standing beside the waterfall was a piper playing a mystical tune. (Chanel)

On a dark mysterious night the piper waited for the right moment to play his mystical tune. (Shawn)

Beneath the glinting moonlight there was a diminutive village where all of the rats were hypnotized by the mystical tune. (Nezinli)

Under the bright shining moon a piper and his flute played a mystical tune. (Dominiq)

Under the crescent moon, in the gloomy shadows the piper played a stupendously, breathtaking and mystical tune. (Matthew)

As the rats ran the piper played a luring and mystical tune. (Naomi)

While the children followed the piper they listened to his mystical tune. (Chelsea)

As the piper played his small flute, the revolting rats were hypnotized by his mystical tune. (Kayde)

Directing millions of rats out of the village was a strange man playing a mystical tune. (Kayde)

Beside the ancient fountain leant a piper who was waiting to play his mystical tune. (Sifa)

On a dark night stood a piper playing a mystical tune. (Lewis)

From the piper’s flute there played a mystical tune. (Emilee)

As the piper played his flute the rats were lured by the mystical tune. (Te Roimata)

2 comments:

  1. I am amazed at the many different ways you people have come up with to describe the Pied Piper playing his pipe. So many interesting words and sentences! Good on you Room 14.
    Mrs Burt

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  2. Hi room 14,
    I can see that you are trying really hard to improve your writing.
    It sounds really good.
    I like the way that you have described
    each sentence with different
    Complex and vocab sentences.
    Remember strive to succeed and champions never give up..
    Keep up the good work.

    God Bless.

    By Joshua.
    By Joshua

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