Nervously waiting on the cold hard concrete, I challenged myself to beat my mates at today's cross country. As we started, I felt shy. Then Mr Burt said, "Go!" and I just started to jog. After a while I started to run faster. I ran past my best friend Jesiah and I was coming first. I got to the finish line and I had run so fast that I felt puffed but totally excited, because I had won
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Hi Lorenzo
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used some interesting words you used for your Cross Country story. It sounds like you really tried you hardest to be able to come first. That is a good paragraph that you have written
Bye for now Ashleigh
Congratulations Lorenzo! Well done. I saw you running in towards the finish line. All that training helped! I hope you keep working just as hard with all you do in class too.
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Hi Lorenzo
ReplyDeleteWell done! You are a champion! I also like the movie that is included with your post. Keep up the good work.
Hi Lorenzo
ReplyDeleteThat movie was awesome i really like the way you used strong and interesting words in your writing
Was that you who ran so fast?
Keep up the amazing work.