
Thursday, May 6, 2010
Silas learns about IRON!

Heremaia Iron Brion

Iron Brion taught us heaps of stuff yesterday about food at 12 o'clock.
First thing on the list was meat. Did you know that red meat, beef or lamb, has more Iron than white meat like chicken or fish? Next we learnt about vegetables and fruit. Fruit at school is good for you because it helps your brain work.
Mary L Iron Brion

Yesterday, in the morning we went to a special assembly called Iron Brian to learn about healthy food and iron. While Eddie cooked the burgers Sarah and I.B were telling the audience which food to eat the most. After that we did the I.B exercise and had a challange against the Iron Team and we were called the Protein Team. When we finished I.B shouted out the winner loud so that we could all hear ,and that winner was the Protein Team.
Samuela's recount of Iron Brion.

After morning tea we went to Iron Brion to learn about heathy food. There was a lady called Sarah and a man called Iron Brion - they were the people that did the show for us. Iron Brion said steak and lamb and iron is good for everyone in the world to eat. After that we did jump jam before we ate our burgers that Eddie had made for us.
Dillon's Recount of Iron Brion
We went to Iron Brion to learn about Iron that is in steak and lamb .There were men called Eddie and Iron Brion and a lady named Sarah.We had some cool games in the hall with Iron Brion. I went up and danced on the stage and we all won a prize. We did jump jam and said huu haa huuhaaa. We had burgers with iron in them for lunch.
Wednesday, May 5, 2010
Iva's Volcano Story
Iva has been practicing sorting his paragraphs into like ideas. Here he reads in front of the camera for the first time. What do you think?
Maru's Cool Volcano Story
Maru's paragraph about an erupting volcano contains an awesome mix of complex and simple sentences. Tell her what you think about her writing.
My great volcano story.
Onosai has been learning about complex and simple sentences. In this paragraph he combines them beautifully to tell us about an erupting volcano.
The Erupting Volcano
Eleva wrote this paragraph about an erupting volcano. She has been learning about different kinds of sentences in a paragraph. Can you tell which sentences are complex in her story?
Heremaia's Cool Volcano Story
Room 14 have been learning about what makes an awesome paragraph.
Here's Heremaia tells us about an erupting volcano.
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