Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Maru's Cool Volcano Story


Maru's paragraph about an erupting volcano contains an awesome mix of complex and simple sentences. Tell her what you think about her writing.

2 comments:

  1. Hi room 14 your story was about vocanoes. thank you for sharing with us.
    From Korobeau

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  2. Hi Maru

    good gob that sory of the volcano is awasome
    keep up the hard work
    from Lola

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