Friday, June 4, 2010

Jesiah's Rainy Day

As it rained, puddles and a lake formed in front of the classroom. I looked out the window and the lake was still there and it was growing larger.The big puddles almost filled the whole court, it was like a pool. Once the rain stopped, the lake dried up again.

2 comments:

  1. I really liked how you followed our writing criteria so carefully. It meant that you were able to write a great paragraph that was on topic and interesting to read. Keep it up Jesiah.

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  2. Hi Jesiah
    Great work on your writing and picture. I liked how you sed clever vocab in your writing like larger and puddles. Keep up the good work.

    Crusader

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