Friday, June 4, 2010

Osana's Rainy Day


Early in the morning, the rain came down and it completely blanketed the school. The rain bucketed down onto the roof. It made a very big puddle on the court. The cold dangerous weather was so sad and dismal.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Osana, What a fabulous piece of writing here. I love the words you chose to desribe what it was like during that rainy week we had. I especially agree with the feeling of being 'blanketed' by wet weather. Even the walls inside the corridors were damp! Great picture too.
    Mrs Burt
    PS. I love the makeover your class blog has had. It looks very styley!

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  2. Hi Osana,

    I really enjoyed reading your story. I think you have used some excellent descriptive language in your story to explain what the rain was like. Your picture is great as well, the rain looks really heavy.
    Keep up the great work

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