Helen King at Pt England School has an amazing class of year three and four boys. Together we learn, create and share to make the world more awesomer
Hi Osana, What a fabulous piece of writing here. I love the words you chose to desribe what it was like during that rainy week we had. I especially agree with the feeling of being 'blanketed' by wet weather. Even the walls inside the corridors were damp! Great picture too.Mrs BurtPS. I love the makeover your class blog has had. It looks very styley!
Hi Osana,I really enjoyed reading your story. I think you have used some excellent descriptive language in your story to explain what the rain was like. Your picture is great as well, the rain looks really heavy.Keep up the great work