Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Mary 's Trip story



As I was sailing, gale force winds were lashing my hair and icy raindrops were biting my face. Heaving with all our might, Room14 struggled, trying their very best to raise the sails.
While we were sailing, I saw wake trailing behind us, lapping against the boat.

1 comment:

  1. Wow!Mary
    What are a great paragraph you have been working on. You have been putting interesting topic words and complex mix with simple.

    Turuhira

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