Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Dillon's Camp Poem

Cautiously I went up the steep rocky wall.
Anxiously I skated in the oval ring.
Munching in our tent like we were having a big feast.
Percariously I tip toed passed the crabs to my kayak.
Kindly I helped some people to drag their kayak.
I crept out of my bed but Miss King snapped me.
Nachos were the chips I munched for my midnight feast
Dads were the security for at night.
Naughtily I had a big midnight feast.
Excitedly I jumped out of the van to go skating.
Skating lets you do so many talented things.

1 comment:

  1. Dillon,

    I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, AL.

    Was this footage from your trip at camp? If this is you, it looks like you had a blast! I love your poem and your usage of adjectives and adverbs. You seem to have a natural talent for writing, so I hope you continue to write! Thank you for sharing this video and poem.