Thursday, June 3, 2010

Eleva's Rainy Day

At lunch I looked through the window. Falling rain fell on the grass, making lots of puddles. When it was time to pack up, there were thundering stormy noises.The puddles outside grew bigger and bigger

1 comment:

  1. Eleva, I like the way that you are focusing on your writing. You are following instructions and paying attention to what you should be learning, Well done on writing a cool paragraph.