Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Lorenzo Cross Country

Nervously waiting on the cold hard concrete, I challenged myself to beat my mates at today's cross country. As we started, I felt shy. Then Mr Burt said, "Go!" and I just started to jog. After a while I started to run faster. I ran past my best friend Jesiah and I was coming first. I got to the finish line and I had run so fast that I felt puffed but totally excited, because I had won


  1. Hi Lorenzo
    I like the way you used some interesting words you used for your Cross Country story. It sounds like you really tried you hardest to be able to come first. That is a good paragraph that you have written
    Bye for now Ashleigh

  2. Congratulations Lorenzo! Well done. I saw you running in towards the finish line. All that training helped! I hope you keep working just as hard with all you do in class too.
    Mrs Tele'a

  3. Hi Lorenzo

    Well done! You are a champion! I also like the movie that is included with your post. Keep up the good work.

  4. Hi Lorenzo

    That movie was awesome i really like the way you used strong and interesting words in your writing
    Was that you who ran so fast?
    Keep up the amazing work.